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all funny by ~seiv15:iconseiv15:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Fixed


Battered, bruised
Shattered and used
Count the cost, time to muse
What I lost and all that booze.

Felt all funny today
Surprised, never felt this way
Many streams and rivers flow
Straight down and into my toe.

Attention, love
Extension and all the above
Take a break, catch the dove
So very fake and that’s enough.

Felt all funny yesterday
Now I know why I felt that way
I did not see my love that day
And so I had to find another way.
©2005-2009 ~seiv15
:iconseiv15:

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meh, you know the score.

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~Beautifull-Freak Jul 23, 2005, 10:16:02 AM
Good luck

--
Curt: Excuse me fellows, may I raise a glass to the loveliest man in Europe.
Brian: And they tell you it's "not natural"!

Nothing makes one so vain as being told one is a sinner
:iconseiv15:
~seiv15 Jul 23, 2005, 11:21:12 AM
thankyou.

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
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~denials-world Jul 23, 2005, 1:20:49 PM
Wow! I really liked that one! :D

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Dear So and So; you kiss like a boy.
:iconseiv15:
~seiv15 Jul 24, 2005, 4:21:30 AM
thankyou.

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
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~Mattysgirl Jul 26, 2005, 7:45:56 AM
Interesting, your poems always leave me thinking and that's good....:nod:

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I am alone, I am scared, I am...the missing page.
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~seiv15 Jul 27, 2005, 10:48:46 AM
good, im glad to hear it.

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
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~EverBroken Jul 30, 2005, 4:00:55 PM
:) Ah, I love the first part of this, it really seems to house a bit of regret. Your writing just keeps getting better and more cryptic. I love it.

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:iconseiv15:
~seiv15 Aug 6, 2005, 10:50:00 AM
thankyou.

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
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~loveandpeacepenguin Aug 8, 2005, 10:25:22 AM
Mm. Powerfull. Good job on this one.

--
Sarcasm is the lowest form of wit.
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:heart: & :peace: :penguin:
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