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Last Words by ~seiv15:iconseiv15:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Traditional Fixed Forms


Sacrilegious thoughts of life
Loving death avoiding strife
Killing fame, fortune to be
Hope and love, wait and see

Connotations of worldly love
Never fit quite like a glove
Oh how we never did see
All the things that we really should be

Indecisive hopes and dreams
Melodramatic signs and themes
To show all our grief and sorrow
And map the flight of a sparrow

Mysterious ways to find the key
All the solutions you could never see
The riddles you never understood
I am an enigma no-one ever could…
©2005-2010 ~seiv15
:iconseiv15:

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~EverBroken Nov 28, 2005, 8:30:21 PM
Sometimes I feel like I just don't quite belong. Like I'm always opposite of what is "supposed" to be. A love of death, a lack of love for money.... all the things that are supposed normalcy. And, though probably not what you had intended, that is what this speaks to me.

:)

I :heart: it.

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Once in his life, every man is entitled to fall madly in love with a gorgeous redhead.

- Lucille Ball
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~seiv15 Nov 29, 2005, 2:10:49 AM
i meant a lot by this poem and that is a good thought.

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
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~EverBroken Nov 29, 2005, 8:21:46 PM
Thank you. And I'm glad you wrote it.... it provoked a lot of thought in me. As usual. :)

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Once in his life, every man is entitled to fall madly in love with a gorgeous redhead.

- Lucille Ball
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~seiv15 Nov 30, 2005, 3:18:49 PM
hehe, i try.

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
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~LgthAoshi14 Oct 30, 2005, 8:02:44 AM
the last stanza really touched me, bravo with this piece


:rose:

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Simple words my dear,
it's all about simple, honest words...
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~seiv15 Oct 30, 2005, 9:10:14 AM
thankyou very much.

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
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~Beautifull-Freak Oct 29, 2005, 6:11:46 PM
Your last words? You lost me on the first, mate

This is a wonderful piece.. A fav

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Avatar by *Skitsofrenika

Stand out on the edge of the stage
Dive into the center of t'crowd
Walk right on the hands of the fans
Glare into this new fangirl's face

It's not a matter of duck, it's just a matter of thyme
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~seiv15 Oct 30, 2005, 5:52:36 AM
hehe, i try...

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
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~Beautifull-Freak Oct 30, 2005, 6:43:29 AM
I'm curious about what this is about exactly..

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Avatar by *Skitsofrenika

Stand out on the edge of the stage
Dive into the center of t'crowd
Walk right on the hands of the fans
Glare into this new fangirl's face

It's not a matter of duck, it's just a matter of thyme
:iconseiv15:
~seiv15 Oct 30, 2005, 9:07:48 AM
hehe, since when did i ever tell people what my poems are about?

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
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