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Sands of time, pass me by
Show me the end, my death at last.
On my knees, I wonder why
These cuts, they fade so fast.

Take me to the edge and over I go
Let me see the ones that I wish I saw.
Fought so hard, to see you so
Yet I have to watch you hurt some more.

Let me go,
Let me fly
Let me flow,
Down to the river where she does lie.
Let me hope
And see
And be
Everywhere that she can see me.

I want to feel, feel her love
To touch her, her lips so soft.
To be there, as her dove
To see her, see her so often.
©2005-2009 ~seiv15
:iconseiv15:

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I'm not sure if i like this but it does say what i want it to say, i had a lot of trouble with the rhyming.

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:icondenials-world:
I like that alot! In fact I like it so much I (the almighty alex( It explains that in my journal by the way)) shall pick it :)

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Dear So and So; you kiss like a boy.
:iconseiv15:
cool, thanks.

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
:iconbeautifull-freak:
I love the last part, that's totally cute.. :clap:

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Curt: Excuse me fellows, may I raise a glass to the loveliest man in Europe.
Brian: And they tell you it's "not natural"!


Nothing makes one so vain as being told one is a sinner
:iconseiv15:
thankyou.

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
:iconmattysgirl:
pretty! greta work.

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I am alone, I am scared, I am...the missing page.
:iconbeautifull-freak:
Welcome

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Curt: Excuse me fellows, may I raise a glass to the loveliest man in Europe.
Brian: And they tell you it's "not natural"!


Nothing makes one so vain as being told one is a sinner
:iconseiv15:
thankyou.

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
:iconsopranosfan:
i think this is a beautiful piece. i must fav

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"I've made a commitment....I'm willing to bleed for you.
I needed fullfillment......I found what I need in you..." Staind- Right here
:iconseiv15:
thankyou very much.

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love

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